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Craft & Analysis — Feature

Zahn and the pleasure of watching someone be good at their job

Competence as a genre: how one author’s house style became the default register of Star Wars fiction.

· B. Mays

There is a specific pleasure that Timothy Zahn’s Star Wars novels supply more reliably than anyone else’s, and it has almost nothing to do with the Force. It is the pleasure of watching a professional do a job well while somebody less capable stands nearby and misunderstands it.

The engine

Take the structure of Thrawn (Del Rey, 2017). The tactical sequences are the advertised attraction, but the actual engine of the novel is an outsider working a bureaucracy: an alien officer in a human-supremacist navy, promoted for results and resented for existing, paired with a young aide who is the reader’s way in. The set pieces are the reward. The institution is the plot.

The same engine is running in Heir to the Empire twenty-six years earlier, pointed the other way: a New Republic that has won the war and now has to run a government, staffed by people whose skills were built for insurgency. Zahn is consistently more interested in the org chart than in the duel.

Why it worked so well as a template

Because it solves a structural problem that Star Wars prose has and Star Wars film does not. A film can put a lightsaber in the frame and let the image do the work. A novel has to earn the same tension with sentences, and “here is a person who is extremely good at a difficult, specific thing, and here is exactly how they do it” is a reliable way to generate that tension on the page.

Once Heir to the Empire demonstrated in 1991 that the approach sold, it became something close to the house register. The military-procedural strand that runs through the Bantam years — squadron novels, intelligence novels, fleet novels — is drawing on the same well.

The cost

Competence fiction has a failure mode, and Zahn is not immune to it. When the antagonist has to lose, the author must make somebody act below their established competence, and you can occasionally see the hand doing it. Characters have flashes of stupidity precisely when the plot requires an opening. It is the genre’s standing tax.

There is a second cost, subtler. A book that admires competence above all else can slide into admiring the competent regardless of what they are competent at. Thrawn is a servant of a genocidal state. The novels know this — the 2017 book in particular is careful to keep the Empire’s cruelty in frame — but the reading pleasure runs in the opposite direction to the moral judgement, and a reader has to do some of that work themselves.

The long arc

Zahn has now written Thrawn in two continuities: the 1991–1993 Legends trilogy, the 2017–2019 canon trilogy, and the Thrawn Ascendancy prequels — Chaos Rising (September 2020), Greater Good (April 2021) and Lesser Evil (November 2021). He had also already written Outbound Flight (2006) in the Legends continuity, and Alliances and Treason in the canon one. Across thirty years and two versions of the galaxy, the method has not changed. That is either a limitation or a signature, and after this many books I have stopped thinking it is the former.

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